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Edit: Adjusted the colors (and changed the title). I think it's getting better.

So, yeah. I'm trying to do more sequential coloring work so I can show to some more editors possibly at WWPhilly. I found this piece by Chris Bachalo and Tim Townsend [link] and gave it a whirl. But I'm not 100% happy with it, and I don't know why. I'm a firm believer that my colors can "work" on any artist, but I wonder if I'm mistaken. I wanted some feedback from you guys who have fresher eyes than me to tell me what needs fixing. Thanks.


Characters © Marvel
Original image: [link]


Page 2 Colors: [link]
Page 3 Colors: [link]
Page 4 Colors: [link]
Page 5 Colors: [link]
Page 6 Colors: [link]
Page 7 Colors: [link]

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:iconwytherwing:
awesome work bro! :thumbsup:

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:iconnorthchavis:
Thanks. You don't think there's anything wrong with it??

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:iconwytherwing:
:) looks good to me Steve... but i'm not an expert on digital coloring so i really can't offer ya any serious crit.

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:iconnorthchavis:
Haha, thanks!

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:iconwytherwing:
;) :highfive:

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:iconphoenix-61:
I really can agree with :iconwyhterwing: it's good? But maybe you don't feel so good about it becuase it's not the kind of work you're used to colouring??

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:iconnorthchavis:
Perhaps. Thank you for that.

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“To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but risk must be taken because the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing.”
:iconphoenix-61:
:)

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:iconbrokenhill:
Hey steve,Do have a acount at penciljack,
They will give you CRITS belive me.And it helps

here is the link sign up let er'rip
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